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Post by plasmis on Feb 7, 2011 11:29:48 GMT -5
Arata Ken: You begin to head towards the Forsaken Land. You look around and realize that a purple fog is slowly setting in around you. You also notice that there are less and less trees around you, they're now pretty scarce. On the horizon, the eye of the beholder begins to fade. Its glare disappears and the eye becomes dimmed by the dark gradient of heaven. It seems that daytime is about to break, and Phoebe is about to illuminate its lunar appearance. Just on the brinks of Ranterra, a gecko and bunny can be seen, trampling on the high grounds of the grass plain. They are hungry, tired, and spiritless. They are heading to the Temple of Teroja, yet they have a long way to go. They are now heading toward the Forsaken Land, which is just a hundred meters away from their current position. "I think we should take a rest...", Benny said in exhaustion. He even stops running and lays down on the grassy terrain. Arata Ken pulls him off by the ears with his bare hands. "Now, c'mon!" he said. "We're almost at our destination. Just wait a little longer!" "But I can't move anymore!" Benny nagged. Arata Ken mocks him, "But I can't move anymore--, can't move anymore my butt! How are you going to be able to fight if you can't even experience the hardships of basic footwork!" 'But, i just can't-", Benny said. Arata Ken stops him shortly and says, "But, you can keep on moving, if you... DON'T GIVE UP!" Benny stops talking. "Learn to have some endurance in yourself", Arata Ken said. "You have to remember that we're doing this for a quest. Our quest is to arrive at our destination and find out what's going on with Ranterra. All of these events have to have a meaning of some sort; therefore, we must find out and in order to do that, we need to talk to Master Onokkusu." Benny nods. "So, can you please get back up on your feet?" Benny understood and gets back up on his feet. "But, can I, at least, eat a snack?" Benny questioned. Arata Ken doesn't reply and pulls out a packet of crackers from his backpack. He hands it to Benny, and Benny opens the packet and chew slowly on the crackers. "Now, let's move on...", Arata Ken said. They continue to move on from the high grounds. They encounter a rocky slope at the end of the high ground. "So, shall we slide down?" Arata Ken said. "I'm up for it, Master Ken!" Benny said excitedly. Without a moment to think, Benny slides down first. Then, Arata Ken slides down after him. The rocky slope is steep with pebbles, and sediments of rocks. The slope twists and turns as they slide on their backs. It would've been nice if the slope is less of a bumpy ride. "You enjoying this?!" Arata Ken shouted out. "Yeah!! You know! We, rabbits, do this type of activity every single day when we have the chance!!" Benny shouted happily. The slope extends toward the Forsaken Land. Arata Ken and Benny are too distracted to notice the purple fog that is in their view. The trees begin to disappear. The atmosphere changes into a dark, eerie environment. The once, grassy terrain is now gone, and now gray, dead soil is seen on the dead terrain that surrounds the Forsaken Land. Arata Ken and Benny immediately break free from their distraction and look ahead, while they are continuously sliding on the rocky slope. "What is that purple fog?' Benny said. "That purple fog means trouble, and I mean something is definitely giving me the creeps", Arata Ken said. "Hit the brakes!!" Arata Ken and Benny attempt to stop sliding, but it is unsuccessful. They are unable to stop. It is as if they are being forced to stay on lane. As they get closer and closer to the purple fog, they remain calm, but something is telling them that whatever this fog is, this fog is the one-way passage to the Temple of Teroja. It looks they have arrive. Arata Ken says in a low tone, "Benny, we are finally here." Benny looks back at Arata Ken in fear. "W-W-What do you mean?!" Benny yells out in fear. Arata Ken smirks and says, "Welcome to the Forsaken Land". To be continued...
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Post by DGN on Feb 7, 2011 12:11:30 GMT -5
Wow. About 740 words. 0.o I'm not going to top that. Too hard. You write very well. Makes me feel like I'm reading a book. A good book. That'd I'd finish in 3 days.
Now, where does Arata take a packet of Crackers from? XD
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Post by member 777 on Feb 7, 2011 15:01:41 GMT -5
gerneric is a fardistance from me [after 8 turns i think i will be there ]
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Post by Slissith on Feb 7, 2011 15:41:04 GMT -5
Sucho finds a warm complex of bushes decides to take a nap. He makes a complex sound, a growl/yawn and lies down to the ground, his jacket covering him.
In his dream, everyone is like him! The policemen, the merchants, the women, the children. He is one of them! He smiles-as much as a crocodile can smile-in his sleep.
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Post by DGN on Feb 7, 2011 17:14:45 GMT -5
Never smile at a croccodile.
"*gasp*gasp*gasp*, I'M SO TERRIFIED I COULD LOSE MY MIIIIIIINDDDDDD!!!!" says Thumper, petrified with fright. Adam tries to cut a wall open using his sword, but deems no success. "Well, Thumper,"Adam starts to say, knowing Thumper would go even more crazier after hearing his sentence,"I'm afraid we're going to have to keep on traveling forward in this cavern."
"WHAAAAAAAAAAT!!! I COULDN'T EVEN STAND THE TERRIBLE, HORRIBLE COMPLETELY TERRIFYING THOUGHTS OF GOING THERE!" "Too bad. Its time for Adventure."
"I hated that show," Thumper says whilst we continue to travel down the staircase. "Too much horrible come-" "THUMPER!" Adam rudely interrupts. "Now is not the time for discourse." Thumper turns quiet, when Adam comes across a door on the wall. He opens it, and he thinks he sees a peculiar flash. He nods it off, as he's seen a lot in the past few days, and it was likely to just be his imagination. He peeks in, seeing nothing, then walks back out.
Somehow, he thinks he sees a sliver of something, and quickly goes to the right, seeing an outline of a Y, with an eye in the corners and in the middle, in many different angles, but it quickly disappears. Adam draws his sword, getting ready for an attack of some sort, eyeing the sliver for any sudden movements. Thumper, backed up in a corner, yells, "OH, I GOTTA GET OUT'A HERE!" and runs away, back towards the wall, up the staircase.
The darkness then turns around, looking like he's about to dash forward to possess Thumper. "Wrong move," I thought, and with out a second ponder, I stab the back of the slim Shadow's eye. In case he gets out of my sword, though, I start up my jet shoes, preparing to chase him in his path.
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Post by plasmis on Feb 7, 2011 19:15:06 GMT -5
Lol, at least you're trying to type more. Quantity and quality are much better than before. Also, I can see a lot more plot. Keep up the good work!
Edit: I edited my post before. Arata Ken took out a packet of crackers from his backpack.
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 7, 2011 19:23:45 GMT -5
In order: Arata Ken: *roll* There don't appear to be any monsters or enemies around at the moment. Although the fog seems to be making a weird humming noise... Red: K, I assume you're heading out then? *roll* Dang freaking nabit. Sucho: *roll* What's up with the dice today? Darn you all. You continue to enjoy your pleasant dream, and *roll*... Ah, much better... You begin to feel your wounds... in your dream. E. Adam: "Too bad. Its time for Adventure." It's.... AAAAADVEEENTUUUURE TIIIIIIIIIIMEEEEE!!!Anyways... *100* DARN YOU I WAS GONNA HAVE FUN WITH THAT. The shadow instantaneously disintegrates from the light of your electro sword.
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Post by DGN on Feb 7, 2011 20:43:03 GMT -5
plasmis: Thanks. Though with the action scenes, there going to be small so I can attack them. No need for a 95-word description of I ATTACK!!!! @detta: "Phew, what I wonderful relief. I thought it would be torture to destroy that guy." Nodding it off, I walk forwards, when suddenly, I hear another thing forming behind me. Thankfully, its not sideways at the time (think Mr. game and watch), and I slice it back. Yes, I wanted to have fun with that as well. Also, you can take the El Maiz and Sucho images from here: ssbcforum.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=sa&action=display&thread=89EDIT: Also, it appears Daw and Golden lost interest.
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 7, 2011 21:02:52 GMT -5
Golden hasn't lost interest, I'm just waiting for him to come in. I already gave him his introductory part, he comes in a bit late though. I think DaW's lost interest though. I haven't heard anything from him.
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Post by phantomhp on Feb 7, 2011 22:09:40 GMT -5
Gernic, you are writing so much better than me now!! oh well, I'm trying to put everything through the eyes of an undead swordsman with no memory. He doesn't care about the smallest details and most of his RPing is in his head.
My body aches still as I try and think back on what that name meant. Every encounter with Phantasm makes me feel more uneasy, and yet somehow things become more clear as well. First I remembered my name, and then the name of a friend Dane. If I keep fighting will I eventually remember who I am and where I am, and who this mysterious new character is? I even feel stronger than before, if only slightly. Maybe I've actually forgotten how to fight at full strength. Maybe the secret to defeating the shadows is by unlocking my full potential, and not by means of a stronger weapon.
I am still very disturbed by what Phantasm said. What did he mean by saying I could be the strongest? AAAAAAH the need for answers is causing me so much pain!
"ANSWER ME!!!" I shout at my companions in frustration. Dane hides in Max's biker helmet as the latter turns to me and says, "calm down! You just fought two of those shadow clones in a row, rushing in blindly! They call me mad Max, but your the one who's really lost it. Ranterra is the place we're at dude. You just need to lie back right now and relax. You won't be able to fight much longer and I won't be able to save my friends if we continue like this."
He's right. What can I do if my body withers away like this? The only way for me to get answers though is to press on though, so taking it easy won't be a choice. The dark power I feel grows stronger every day, yet I'm no closer to reaching it than I was before. Apparently Ranterra is this world. That makes Phantasm's goals quite clear, and his master whoever that is. He wants me to destroy the world.... I just don't know what's right or wrong anymore.
"I think I'll take a walk. I'll be back by nightfall." Max nods to me but as I leave, the bunny hops toward me. "Fine, you can come with". Dane joyfully hops behind me as I leave the inn.
OK, this RPing the right way is actually really fun!! It's hard to stop.
Dane speaks to me as we walk out. "where are you from? Why do you wear bandages? Do you remember your home? I don't remember mine!....." So much noise, what is this creature trying to do, start a conversation? I need peace to concentrate but this thing won't shut up. "Do you like strawberry pie? I LOVE strawberry pie! It's my favorite on a nice summer day. Haven't had any since Boredom. Do you know the Easter bunny?....."
"Let me tell you this Dane, I barely remember anything past my name. I don't know where we are or where I'm from or what strawberry pie even is!" He then chuckles then asks "Do you want to destroy the world?" There was something very different with that last question. I think he knows what I'm thinking. This bunny definitely has unique powers. "What kind of question is that?" I ask. "You'll have to answer it shortly. It's getting dark though and no one should be out this late at night"...
almost 600 words of story! That's probably the most I'll do in one things unless I have nothing better to do. Plasmis, I really understand why you do it now, soooo much fun.
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 7, 2011 22:31:25 GMT -5
The Arena Lords would be proud of you guys. Anyways... Fun, you've given me a plot twist to work with.
Also... It seems that Nights Owl no longer has time to play, so she's given me permission to kill off Sumikaptain Falcon. So... "As Sumikaptain Falcon is whizzing around in the Blue Falcon, she sees in her rear view mirror that there's a bunny in the back seat, grinning evilly. She whips around, not believing her eyes, but it's gone. Suddenly, she hears someone shout, "Look out!" But alas, too late. As she flings herself forward once more, she sees that she's quickly hurtling towards a wall. With no way of stopping the blue falcon, and the ejector seat out of order, she decides to go out with one last... "FAAAAAAALCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON....." "PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNNNNCCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" *horrific crash* A bunny appears next to the smoldering wreckage. ... "...You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?" ... ... R.I.P. Sumikaptain Falcon, 1-2something-11 - 2-7-11
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Post by member 777 on Feb 8, 2011 5:14:01 GMT -5
[japense voice .]noooo... captain falcon
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Post by plasmis on Feb 8, 2011 11:31:36 GMT -5
Arata Ken: *roll* There don't appear to be any monsters or enemies around at the moment. Although the fog seems to be making a weird humming noise... As they descend to the depths of the thick fog, Arata Ken and Benny close their eyes tightly. "Benny!" Arata Ken yelled. "W-What?!" Benny replied back. "I want you to close your eyes! This fog might disrupt our vision!" Both of them close their eyes. "W-Wait!" Benny yelled. "How are you sure that this is harmful?!" "Don't question! And just keep them close!" Arata Ken said. How long have they been sliding? They really don't know. They must have been sliding for hours because the ride isn't far from over, but they have been moving at a slower rate. Surely enough, they can easily stop and hop off of the slide. Quite occasionally, a humming sound can be heard from the air. Without paying much attention to it, they keep on sliding into the great unknown. "Master Ken!" Benny shouted. Arata Ken doesn't reply. "Arata Ken?!!" Realizing that something is wrong, Benny opens his eyes and picks a nearby pebble from the rocky slope. The pebble resembles the size of a paintball. Without any moment to lose, he throws it above his head. The pebble hits Arata Ken by the crouch. Arata Ken feels a sharp pain and opens his eyes. He yelps out, "What the @#$% was that?!!!" He picks up the pebble from his crouch and hurls it at Benny's head. A loud thud is heard. Benny grips his head. "I-I-I'm sorry!!!" Benny shouted in agony. "I thought you fainted!!" "Don't you ever do that again!!" Arata Ken said with fury. "You should worry more about yourself!!" He pauses and says, "What is it that you want?!" "Are we almost there yet?" Benny said. Arata Ken observes his surroundings. There is nothing, but a thick purple fog. There is nothing to be seen, especially when the fog conceals everything in sight. Arata Ken finally says, "I don't think we're even close." He pauses and thinks for a moment. "Since we are sliding at a slower rate, why don't we attempt to brake ourselves?" Benny says, "I-I guess we can try, but what if it doesn't work?" "If it doesn't work, then we'll be stuck on this damn slope until it ends", Arata Ken said. "And right now, the slope doesn't seem to have an ending. So, shall we give another shot?" "I'm ready when you are, Master Ken!" Benny said. "Now, BRAKE!!!" Arata Ken shouted out. They put both of their feet on the hard, rough surface of the rocky slope. Little pebbles begin to fall out as their feet are dug onto the earth. "Man, this would've been easier if I still have my grappling hook on me!" Arata Ken said with a grunt. "What happen to your weapon?!" Benny shouted. "Don't ask!" Arata Ken said. "I'll tell you later! Hold on there, Benny!" Arata Ken's hands begin to glow with a purple aura. His eyes are focused on his hands as he waits for the final moment. "Benny!" Arata Ken shouted. "What?!" Benny shouted back. "I'm going to make a pit stop for us!" Arata Ken said. "I'm going to pound the living crap out of this slope!" "W-Wait, what?!" Benny said. Before Benny can even get his answer, Arata Ken is already too focused on what he's about to do. His eyes begin to change color. The color of his eyes changed from black to cyan. His body glowed into the color of his fists. "Grab onto my tail!" Arata Ken yelled out. Without hesitation, Benny did what he said. He, immediately, grabs onto Arata Ken's tail. He grips it so tight that a red mark can be seen. "Hold on tight!" Arata Ken said. Lightning bolts can be seen from above the thick fog. The lightning bolts seem to bounce in and out of the fog, aiming toward them. "I-I-I-'m s-s-s-scared!!!" Benny said in great fear. Benny looks up at Arata Ken, and Benny is even more frightened by the sight of his friend. "A-A-Arata?" Suddenly, the furious lightning bolts strike at Arata Ken's body. The electric volts seem to channel through his body and into his fists. Arata Ken gives a somewhat of an evil smile. "W-W-What are you doing?!!" Benny shouted. Arata Ken leaps up from the slope and says, "Vindish Channeling Spell #67.....! Final Flash of Vengeance!!" He dives back down on the slope and strikes down the slope with his electrifying fists. The impact is so great that the slope breaks in half. Then, a blinding light overwhelms Arata Ken and Benny. To be continued...
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Post by Slissith on Feb 8, 2011 14:32:50 GMT -5
In Sucho's mind, the dream changes suddenly. As he aches terribly he is transported in a dark corridor. In front of him, his colleague with who he has completed many assignments with. A truly good hearted man-the first to befriend Sucho in the agency. Sucho stands still as his friend is meters away in the corridor taliking to his phone. With frustation, he hangs up while some wierd mechanic dark thing with a claw hand appears behind him.
Sucho can't move or shout-he is frozen! He watches as the creature slashes his friend's head off!
Everything darkens, he finds himself in a deseted city, inbetween tall buildings. As a paper is being swept by the air he feels a striking pain on his back and falls down to the ground. He gets up to see a familiar "face" behind him.
"We have finally found you..."
The creature stood tall. It was like a man, though taller and bulkier than most. It had absolutely no hair and it's bald head was adorned by 2 large eyes, kind of like triangles(think of venom, from spiderman). It was Quilcax. Another genetical experiment of a different sort. Sucho backstepped shocked, but quickly regained control over himself growling in a menacing manner.
Qiulcax's black and musclular arm extended swiftly and hit Sucho in the chest, hurling him to the wall behind him. "You failure! We'll enjoy erasing you from existance!". Sucho dodges a second extending arm and rushes toward his nemesis...
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 8, 2011 20:48:28 GMT -5
The mountain died with the thunderclap. *roll* Luckily, you're not hit by any debris.
Sucho: *roll* Tsk, tsk, tsk. You guys need to learn to stop making enemies for yourselves, eventually it'll go horribly wrong. Quilcax (whose name sounds like Vilgax for some reason) swiftly spins around and smacks you with a roundhouse kick.
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Post by DGN on Feb 8, 2011 22:31:18 GMT -5
Did you get my part? Of when another one appeared behind me and I slashed at him?
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 8, 2011 22:35:08 GMT -5
Oh didn't read that part of your post ^^; *42* You narrowly miss, and *roll* It smashes you against a wall. You take... *roll* 10 damage.
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Post by DGN on Feb 8, 2011 22:36:29 GMT -5
"Ugh," Adam mutters, but quickly retaliates against the wall, springs on his jet shoes, and blasts toward Mr. Shadow&Gamez.
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Post by phantomhp on Feb 8, 2011 23:10:33 GMT -5
are you still thinking about what to do with me or do I need to continue?
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 8, 2011 23:14:01 GMT -5
E. Adam *29*: You entirely miss the shadow again, and *roll* you hit the wall for 2 damage, but the shadow fails to counter attack.
Well, I can't answer dane on your behalf, but I can be dane for a bit. He is an NPC after all. "Well? Well? DO you?" *Dane starts grinning evilly*
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