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Post by StayPuft on Feb 9, 2011 22:38:45 GMT -5
Yes, quite true.
And you guys are here to put a knife to my throat when I slack off, 'mirite?
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Post by falcon8r on Feb 10, 2011 8:34:40 GMT -5
Argh, yeah, ye be walkin' the plank if ye be slackin', landlubber!
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Post by PartisanDaw on Feb 11, 2011 14:23:22 GMT -5
DK looks good so far.
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Post by sumika on Feb 11, 2011 14:35:08 GMT -5
Argh, yeah, ye be walkin' the plank if ye be slackin', landlubber! Lmao.. Then we be makin' ya' swab the poop-deck ya' scallywag! |
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Post by StayPuft on Feb 11, 2011 20:04:22 GMT -5
The fall, though something seems a bit wrong to me.  |
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Post by DGN on Feb 11, 2011 20:15:44 GMT -5
Dk's arms should be a bit lower, and his head should be slightly tilted downwards.
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 11, 2011 20:16:37 GMT -5
Might want his knees to bend a bit more. Or have his hands slightly higher above his head.
And the tie. He's falling, after all.
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Post by StayPuft on Feb 11, 2011 21:49:13 GMT -5
This a little better?  |
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 11, 2011 21:50:58 GMT -5
Much. Still think his hands should be a bit higher though.
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Post by StayPuft on Feb 11, 2011 22:08:49 GMT -5
Hmm... higher? I can try to see how that looks.  |
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Post by member 777 on Feb 12, 2011 0:09:50 GMT -5
goood dk fall
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 12, 2011 0:22:04 GMT -5
Somewhat better. At least you can see his face now.
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Post by phantomhp on Feb 12, 2011 0:29:47 GMT -5
my only complaint is that his fingers look a little....... can't find a nice word, they look mutilated.
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Post by StayPuft on Feb 12, 2011 0:33:06 GMT -5
Yeah, his fingers are surprisingly very hard to work with.
Workin'. Workin'.
Sleeping'... zzzzzz....
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Post by DGN on Feb 12, 2011 7:18:05 GMT -5
REmember, tilt his head so he looks where he's going: down and right.
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Post by StayPuft on Feb 12, 2011 10:03:17 GMT -5
Technically I don't have to, but since I like you (no ****), I'll torture myself with the head. EDIT  |
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Post by falcon8r on Feb 12, 2011 12:28:46 GMT -5
That's better.  Just be sure to look at Brawl for reference and I think you'll be fine. |
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Post by DGN on Feb 12, 2011 13:23:41 GMT -5
Great job so far!
*exalted*
One thing, though...his hands are too small.
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Post by Dettadeus on Feb 12, 2011 13:26:02 GMT -5
The fingers are curled up.
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Post by StayPuft on Feb 12, 2011 17:07:49 GMT -5
It's supposed to kinda be in like a punch-like thing or whatever, I guess. But hey, I can fix mistakes. Or something. I dunno.  |
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Just be sure to look at Brawl for reference and I think you'll be fine.