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Post by EWJim4Crusade on Mar 4, 2011 20:09:16 GMT -5
 For some reason, my animation program won't loop it... Anyways, this is Earthworm Jim in (I hope) the style of Jump Ultimate Stars! Leave Constructive Critisim, Please! |
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Post by GoldenYuiitusin on Mar 4, 2011 20:50:36 GMT -5
I feel that the head needs to be smaller. That's my critique for now.
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Post by DGN on Mar 4, 2011 20:59:47 GMT -5
Not necessarily the head, but moreso the eyes.
And our left leg kind of twitches...I think it should either stay put, or along with the other leg, bend its knees.
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Post by GoldenYuiitusin on Mar 4, 2011 21:14:19 GMT -5
Also, the head should be redesigned. EW Jim's neck isn't really a neck, but a worm body tied in a knot.
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Post by EWJim4Crusade on Mar 4, 2011 21:20:42 GMT -5
It's hard to make a knot out of pixels. Though I do agree with Generic that the legs need work. I myself don't like them. EDIT: Here's some edited SMW Sprites I made out of sheer boredom. Featured are: BoogerMan All Three BattleToads Mobo and Robo Bonanza from "Bonanza Bros."  Once again, Constructive Critisim! |
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Post by El Maiz on Mar 5, 2011 9:42:39 GMT -5
Looks good for a first try! I like it!
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luciole2831
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Post by luciole2831 on Mar 26, 2011 11:30:19 GMT -5
The entire thing should be smaller. And should also have more shading on the head and torso also probably the legs.
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Post by PartisanDaw on Mar 29, 2011 6:15:50 GMT -5
Hey Luciole you came here!Great!(I'm DaW)
Anyways,on what JUS cahracter you based him?
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