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Post by PartisanDaw on Oct 2, 2011 4:29:55 GMT -5
Please? I only need somebody to see if it is grammar correct. Thanks
-An unusual hobby
My hobby is playing tennis,but an unusual tennis,I call it Urban tennis.It's basically tennis whit the official tennis rules but played on places that I and my friend find interesting and places that we can play on.For example , We have a small area whit a wall. For the net we use the head of the Table put sideways.The ball can hit the wall's and trick the player. There are a lot of more court's like : Balkons,Mini-fooball stations,Basket-ball stations and more.
-Weekend/Sunday A typical Sunday begins for me In the morning,quarter to 8 whit my favorite rock bands,listening to them in my bed for 1 hour.Then usually I eat and go out.Recently I started to play Basketball more often and it seems I like it.After the dinner,I go to my friend's or they come to me to play basketball or playing games.We play for almost 2 hours.Then comes the School time,the most hated time...Around 22:00 i go to sleep.
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Post by DGN on Oct 2, 2011 9:01:00 GMT -5
-An unusual hobby
My hobby is playing tennis. However, it is a different type of tennis which I call "urban tennis". Basically, it's normal tennis, but you play on places that my friend and I find interesting and can be played on. One of the areas is a small room with a wall. Our net is the head of a vertical table. However, the ball can hit the wall and trick the opponent. In addition to that court, we have found places like Balkons(please define this), mini-fooball fields, and basket-ball courts.
-Weekend/Sunday A typical Sunday begins as I wake up at a quarter to 8, listening to my favorite rock bands for an hour. Then, I eat my breakfast and head outside. Recently, I started to play basketball more often, and I seem to enjoy it. After dinner(unless in Yugoslavia you eat dinner in the afternoon, as they do in some places, you should give some explanations of what happens before dinner), I head to my friends' house, or they come to mine. When together, we like to play basketball or play a game. We play for about 2 hours. Then, I have to sleep, my least favorite part of the day. Ugh, school is just a drag. I go to sleep at around 22:00. (You should have a good ending sentence right here.)
Also, a bit of advice: When you say the word "whit", it's spelled "with".
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Post by PartisanDaw on Oct 2, 2011 12:48:58 GMT -5
First, I LOVE YOU GENERIC (No H0M0). Second,for balkons,I didn't mean balkons,I mean like Third,Dinner is the second meal in the day,here,around 13:00H. THANKYOU,THANKYOU,THANKYOU.THANKYOU.
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Post by DGN on Oct 2, 2011 12:51:39 GMT -5
lolnp
So that. I'm pretty sure that's a Balcony. So the sentence would be "In addition to that court, we have found places to play like a balcony, (rest of sentence)
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